haiku

[jpx]

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crispness

clouds

the sky exhales

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[jpx]

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a hummingbird glance

a crowd

eye contact with a flower

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not sure if i like that one as much. 'eye contact' is too jargon-y.

[lizzytysh]

It's also a way of looking at that 'interaction' that I'd never considered . When I read it [before your comment], I thought, "I really like that! It's true."

[jpx]

thank-you! it's grown on me slightly in the last couple of hours.

here is one more little two-liner, straight from cali :

<< orange grove
colour and fragrance >>

once i put on the finishing touches i will try to post my full haiku project. ciao for now : )