Gone on to new pastures.

Avalon · Post by **Avalon** » Mon Sep 20, 2004 11:03 am

Critic2 you must LOVE George, for you do nothing more than rant about him. Are you jealous of his writing? I think he is a w*anker like yourself but my you are putting him on a pedestal with your obsessions.

Critic2 you must learn the art of "zipping it".

Martine · Post by **Martine** » Mon Sep 20, 2004 2:23 pm

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Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Mon Sep 20, 2004 6:00 pm

Why do you think George is a w*****. He has just been misled by a site where no-one is willing to give substantive teaching about writing, that's all.

Martine is not a w*****, just enjoying fun banter here. Her limitations as a writer are exposed by the dull repetitive sweaing.

You have done nothing to suggest you are a w***** either. You are just popping in every now and then and trying to act hard. Again, this is a fun distraction.

If any of you are interested in developing creative writing skills, I am ready to help.

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Sep 20, 2004 9:59 pm

I am Critic2, but first you must lower your mask. As I said to a fellow I met in Corfu...........I hate people who do not have the courage of their convictions and hide behind their mummy's skirts.
Surely you are not that type of person, Critic2?

If you are serious in your offer Critic2, reveal thyself. Otherwise shut up and stop annoying people.
Best Regards.......Georges.

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Mon Sep 20, 2004 10:20 pm

I am really surprised if that is your final position, George. If you enrolled at a Language School, or for any educational course would you really leave unless satisfied about your teacher's name. Quite a tricky position to justify intellectually.

I'll tell you whom you should perhaps emulate. I saw some pretty trite verse here from a guy called Peter Danielsen. (When he explained they were actually song lyrics I was more understanding, btw). He responded to the criticism with humour and class.

I don't think you, Martine, Makera, Avalon would be very proud if you re-read your own ranting responses over these threads.

You are wasting such a good opportunity to learn about the rhythm of language and about creative writing.

I have no spaces left for full-time students but I would be happy to offer you at least some tips as you post your writing. It will, however, require you to be far less defensive and insecure about your writing.

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Sep 20, 2004 11:17 pm

Critic2

Goodbye. I tire of your ranting and the fact that you hide behind masks.
Lets see some of your poetry to critique.
Adios........Georges

Martine · Post by **Martine** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 1:38 am

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Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 11:29 am

Martine, the important matter is that even though you are an extremely dull writer now it is possible for even you to improve. An ambition to call someone an asshole in 2000 different ways is a commendable start. Well Done!

Martine · Post by **Martine** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 11:31 am

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Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 11:38 am

By 2 pm today I would like you to leave in my Study your list of 2000 ways to say "asshole". No hesitation, repetition, or, *especially* in your case, deviation is allowed. NOw run along like a good boy and play with all the other kids until school starts at 9.45.

Martine · Post by **Martine** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 11:46 am

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Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 12:15 pm

Do you want to call me later?

Martine · Post by **Martine** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:32 pm

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Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:48 pm

hey, that's your usual form of abuse- no variation at all. poor, poor show, ol' gal.