calm as solitude

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quaileyedsnowfish
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calm as solitude

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The truant rain
the non graves dispute
the feeling here in the void to
be myself
and sometimes not
doubt those wonderful
of honey on the lips
I say every word unheard
vertigo as a
calm feeling
not veering
what I said
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quaileyedsnowfish
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waking up angels

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yes the summer can be breathing
what is The Vision of Light
the dark is like a golden cross
in an ark of a squat
with rear
the gates of eden
inside soft

the fireworks for a grand prize
you do not see things as I always told you
Summer coughs
spring sneezes
wake up angel
You will prompted to follow
I have created in the north
a kiss of dew
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Violet
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Re: waking up angels

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quaileyedsnowfish wrote:yes the summer can be breathing
what is The Vision of Light
the dark is like a golden cross
in an ark of a squat
with rear
the gates of eden
inside soft

the fireworks for a grand prize
you do not see things as I always told you
Summer coughs
spring sneezes
wake up angel
You will prompted to follow
I have created in the north
a kiss of dew
.. I'm thinking this could be a good thing, actually. [the line I highlighted, that is]

.. you are in your dreamy mood again.. (can't say I blame you).. and here in New York it's just so rainy, and dark.. wow -- the downpour just went mad outside. I hope my phone line doesn't go to crap. (oy)

.. be back later maybe.. I need to see to this Chinatownshire business.. (see if I can't finish up my next installment).

be good, fish,

v.
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Re: calm as solitude

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I don't know...

I still don't think that this fish is one of our fish ... or trolls. I think this is some kind of non-speaking/non-friendly visiting fish who has a cold.
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Violet
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Re: calm as solitude

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.. why are you being so resistant to.. well, not rational thought, exactly.. as that, as we all know, has no business in these parts.. but to tried and true religion, let's call it?.. Okay, trickster religion, if you must.

Wake up, girl. It's too late for this sort of thing.

v. xx
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Re: calm as solitude

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I'm an agnostic

I keep reading the subject title as clam not calm ... clam of solitude.

I think a 'Clam of Solitude' might be a more interesting poetry topic then the calm of solitude.
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Re: calm as solitude

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quaileyedsnowfuck wrote:
quaileyedsnowfish wrote:The
too shorts? who can say? try think more words and bigger.
.. fuck.. what the???

[thought I'd reverse that hackneyed phrase]

Violet
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