the grace like rain on fire

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quaileyedsnowfish
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the grace like rain on fire

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I think of the first to pass the Wilderness
allow me to move
to a bright light
shifted according to the voice of god
the endless doping of the core of the voting
in the word
I raise my voice
devoured the strong affection
I have mine in your awareness
the grace fell
on a beam of Jesus in love
respect of the wordless
and starting with the endless
excavated in the final words died down
and they begin dancing as pious siluette of hereditary
eruption of clotting thoughts
flows and the whale on one of scythes
river of beauty
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Violet
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Re: the grace like rain on fire

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OHMUGOD!! Rain on Fire could be the second, uh, "art" flick we do. Your character's name could be Rain.. (a real vixen, truth be told.. and of course, we'd have garnered an audience from our first feline-feature, Volcanic Vixen, as noted on another thread)..


RAIN: ON FIRE!

[I think the exclamation mark is nice too.. I mean, as a little nod to Russ]

.. wow.. keep it up, fish.. these are good.

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