breath of silence

[quaileyedsnowfish]

seed of silence


leave me alone tonight to lie on the grass of Eden
let me reflect on the violins
as the murmur of the heart
tired of complaining
a wall of varnish and strings of gold

the colours, bring grace foot on my piece
and the honour of climbing the horses
on a wave of disruption
the seeds of silence as a neck where I bite
the melancholy brought down
as a high note of a wilderness in the Beagles
powered by
the emotion swaying

[kwills]

Version two hands down!!

[imaginary friend]

Version 2 because
1) It's longer (we like longer pomes around here)
2) The spelling is better (we like better spellers too)

[Violet]

yez, thanz u. spellingz eez nots 4 rulez itz 4 feelingz an howz wordz sowndz. me poemz r fromz mi hart an zent 2 u wiv luvs andz applez!!!!! ha ha ha LOL!!!

.. you know, we all get pummeled at times in life. It could be I'm being pummeled as we speak [as I suggested on another thread].. The point is--

actually, what is my point?

Oh, the point is.. well.. I'm not normally a violent person.. but there is that "last straw that broke the camel's back" sort of scenario that sometimes comes to bear.. as as far as

yez, thanz u. spellingz eez nots 4 rulez itz 4 feelingz an howz wordz sowndz. me poemz r fromz mi hart an zent 2 u wiv luvs andz applez!!!!! ha ha ha LOL!!!

or in other words, as far as you go.. why don't you just


&#$%$@&*!!#$@@*!&#$%$@&*!!#$@@*!&#$%$@&*!!&#$%$@&*!!


.. (gosh.. I feel so much better now) (who knew??)

.. "applez"

.. (my god)..

[quaileyedsnowfish]

there someone using my name
who are you

i only wrote the poem

[Violet]

.. quaileye.. I know it's rather a brutal realization to have have, but.. well.. your identity seems to be splitting rather profoundly, and you may be the last person on earth to really understand the ramifications of this. Why "applez" alone is enough to give us all some serious pause.

.. you might try to get hold of Joanne Woodward.. I think she might know what to do..

[Violet]

.. quaileye.. I know it's rather a brutal realization to have have, but.. well.. your identity seems to be splitting rather profoundly, and you may be the last person on earth to really understand the ramifications of this. Why "applez" alone is enough to give us all some serious pause.

.. you might try to get hold of Joanne Woodward.. I think she might know what to do..

APPLEZ ALONEZ ORS APPLEZ YN PEARSZ!!!!

onlee youse holdz dem kee!!!

.. you know, you almost sound as if you're doing blackface.. and while there are certain white Southerners who may still find that charming, it's-- well, it's just not the right thing to be doing, triple-eyed fish. I mean, how would you like it if someone came along and did a crude impersonation of y-- actually, that would be blackface then, wouldn't it?.. hmm.. something of a conundrum, then..