i'll be wise

[quaileyedsnowfish]

The singular of loneliness

gone all year
write the roof on your head
I am like trash is not as
I'm insisting that is simple
crushed out
with words
that dullness of chess is with their own stupidity
maybe you had the blade closer
You have to press against
before you wrote
for it was no one else
than a concrete chunk
who all but has filthy words
that have nothing to do with each other
innocence against all vice

what should i do


powered by

[Violet]

The singular of loneliness

gone all year
write the roof on your head
I am like trash is not as
I'm insisting that is simple
crushed out
with words
that dullness of chess is with their own stupidity
maybe you had the blade closer
You have to press against
before you wrote
for it was no one else
than a concrete chunk
who all but has filthy words
that have nothing to do with each other
innocence against all vice

what should i do


powered by

.. I wish I had time right now to do this some justice, but offhand, I think you're crumbling [if poetic output is any indication of the poet's state of mind].

I like "powered by".. it seems to beg for an object.

actually, "maybe you had the blade closer," is surprisingly good. It's interesting these moments of transcendence even on the darnedest days..

[quaileyedsnowfish]

it seems that i have a stalker
i'm telling you i'm strucked down by lightning there even using my picture
i'm the real QUAILEYEDSNOWFISH
i don't understand who is doing this
by the way my name is veerle heyninck
pleas beleeve me and
i'm not playing games
trust me
and don't have a clue whats going on

[Violet]

.. you know.. there is the story of the boy who cried wolf. I don't care if your name is Canary Bird. It's too late for this kinda talk.

[Cate]

it seems that i have a stalker
i'm telling you i'm strucked down by lightning there even using my picture
i'm the real QUAILEYEDSNOWFISH

Your poems Q. are abstract.
They are not the run of the mill; moon, soul, heart, sort of ones so they stand out a bit.

The poetry section is as much an entertainment section as it is poetry section (actually it’s more of an entertainment section) and as an entertainment section we require a certain amount of entertainers … which we are a bit short on. Kindly one or two of the forum members step up to keep us amused and will often wear different masks for us (in keeping with Leonard's lyrics "I'll wear a mask for you"). Most members can very clearly see that your join date is different then the other (3 – I think) quailfish people although I personally have no clue if you are playing, a player or just stumbled in.
You’re not being stalked, you’ve simply been pulled up onto the stage.

[Violet]

.. Cate.. the poem's called "I'll be wise," so let's wise up here. No q's need 'splainin to. None.

v. xx x