Self Portrait

K-Holed · Post by **K-Holed** » Sun Aug 22, 2004 12:20 pm

Here I sit
in my darkened room
a single cancerous glow
dying at my lips.

Midnight · Post by **Midnight** » Sun Aug 22, 2004 2:32 pm

Here I sit
by my flickering screen
second-hand smoke
attacking thru the ether

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Sun Aug 22, 2004 5:32 pm

Great, thematically-correct response, Midnight. I enjoyed reading them both

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George Wright · Post by **George Wright** » Sun Aug 22, 2004 5:49 pm

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Sun Aug 22, 2004 11:13 pm

Here i sit
16 years since my last cig
reading about smokes and
the prospect of profound loss

K-Holed · Post by **K-Holed** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 12:13 am

lol. I love the responses!

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Tue Aug 24, 2004 6:28 pm

Here i sit
Petulantly pondering petulance
Pitifully perusing pitiful defeats
Hoping what is important wins in the end