The Garden

[peter danielsen]

From a heaven so near
that the heaven is hear
sounds a tone which never will cease
It is said in the air
that you do have to dare
to fall down and then pray on your knees

Sing out loud in the sun
when the two become one
and the angels will cheer your embrace
and the soul will confess
to this god and say yes
as you worship her murmuring place

Then we never will say
that it's useless to pray
we'll be shouting with joy to the Lord
so our flesh will be pure
as all love is for sure
and we'll witness forever is found.

[lizzytysh]

Similar topic, different approach.

[Sore Loser]

Dear Peter D.,

Your "poetry" is very George-like. Have you noticed?

[Partisan]

There are one or two structural and lexical similarities, but even so i think that is somewhat harsh SL.

p.

[George.Wright]

Nice poem.............were you inspired?
Georges