I've been trying to write some good poetry for a while now,you know something to inspire people,something uplifting,something to make people sit up and take notice,and say "yes the girl's got talent!"
Well anyhow I was up most of the night working on this poem of mine,taking the odd sip or two from some bottles of wine.....I mean a bottle of wine...when it dawned on me,this poem was way too long and needed some refining and trimming,you know,get it tighter ,flowing better on the tongue,after all, having worked so long on this poem I didn't want to disappoint anyone or let myself down,and I wanted Violet to be proud of me for my hard work and effort and all the inhabitants of Cumalot and it's faithful followers.Well, I suppose that's enough procrastinating here is my poem!
Cum Scum
Show us your bum!
Yeah? yeah? you like? No?...no?.....oh!...............
The Art Of Writing Good Poetry
The Art Of Writing Good Poetry
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Re: The Art Of Writing Good Poetry
kwills wrote:I've been trying to write some good poetry for a while now,you know something to inspire people,something uplifting,something to make people sit up and take notice,and say "yes the girl's got talent!"
Well anyhow I was up most of the night working on this poem of mine,taking the odd sip or two from some bottles of wine.....I mean a bottle of wine...when it dawned on me,this poem was way too long and needed some refining and trimming,you know,get it tighter ,flowing better on the tongue,after all, having worked so long on this poem I didn't want to disappoint anyone or let myself down,and I wanted Violet to be proud of me for my hard work and effort and all the inhabitants of Cumalot and it's faithful followers.Well, I suppose that's enough procrastinating here is my poem!
Cum Scum
Show us your bum!
Yeah? yeah? you like? No?...no?.....oh!...............
I've decided it was time you had a bronzing.
Violet
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Gosh,I've never been bronzed before I am deeply honoured.
Thank you Violet you have made my day!
Thank you Violet you have made my day!
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Karren B
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Pure Genius kwills!
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Karren B
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Yorkshire Lad
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Cannot wait for the second verse to cum
manchester, london,manchester , a mountain in Wales ,hills in Haiger
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
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Thank you Karren B I knew you had good taste in poetry.Pure Genius kwills!
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Yorkshire Lad you are such a slave driver it took me months to think of that one! Still quality is worth waiting for so they say.Cannot wait for the second verse to cum
What happened to Mickey's thread The Stalking one?
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Yorkshire Lad
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kwillskwills wrote:Yorkshire Lad you are such a slave driver it took me months to think of that one! Still quality is worth waiting for so they say.Cannot wait for the second verse to cum
Please take your time ! As you rightly say quality is worth waiting for and if you attain the same level of excellence with subsequent verses I will gladly do as you ask via web cam but I must warn you it is not a pretty sight so I would try and lower your poetic abilities if I were you
YL
manchester, london,manchester , a mountain in Wales ,hills in Haiger
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
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Yorkshire Lad
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I was wondering the same thing myself . I had thought of posting a replykwills wrote: What happened to Mickey's thread The Stalking one?
manchester, london,manchester , a mountain in Wales ,hills in Haiger
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
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Ha! Ha! YL can't wait!kwills
Please take your time ! As you rightly say quality is worth waiting for and if you attain the same level of excellence with subsequent verses I will gladly do as you ask via web cam but I must warn you it is not a pretty sight so I would try and lower your poetic abilities if I were you
YL
So was I,but we must have thunk too long as it only took him 6mts & 30 seconds?I was wondering the same thing myself . I had thought of posting a reply
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the best scum/bum poem I have ever read!