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Yorkshire Lad
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Re: Circles

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Carm
"Brief moments with no content "
I supose that should have read "Brief moments without content " as it was referring to the emptiness of a daydream . Sorry for the ambiguity but I liked your response anyway

I am not in a daydream
So rest easy
I only speak of fantasy
But then fantasy is an ambition
To reach another world
And stay there
Until reality sets in
Which brings me back to normality
What circles we live in
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Re: Circles

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Yorkshire Lad writes:
I supose that should have read "Brief moments without content " as it was referring to the emptiness of a daydream . Sorry for the ambiguity…
They say the purpose of
narrative is to present us
with ambiguity, that we
might in turn be open to it,
to take advantage of it, to
look ambiguity square in the
eye so as to ponder the many
other forms of its interpretations.
As it is better understood, we
learn to recognize it as being
quite distinct from vagueness.

Yorkshire Lad writes:
I am not in a daydream
So rest easy
I only speak of fantasy
But then fantasy is an ambition
To reach another world
And stay there
Until reality sets in
Which brings me back to normality
What circles we live in
It is within the magnificent
realms of fantasy where we
can make a complete break.
Ones imagination can confront
the infinite mind of inspiration
and creativity which allows for
the bending and reshaping of
the make-believe world and its
multi-faceted dimensions, and
along the way we recognize
and in turn appreciate that
the canvas of fantasy can be
stretched as wide and as high
as the mind that paints upon it.

:razz:
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Re: Circles

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carm wrote:They say the purpose of
narrative is to present us
with ambiguity, that we
might in turn be open to it,
to take advantage of it, to
look ambiguity square in the
eye so as to ponder the many
other forms of its interpretations.
As it is better understood, we
learn to recognize it as being
quite distinct from vagueness.
I am not ambiguous
So rest easy
I only speak of the truth
But then truth is an ambition
To reach probity
And stay there
Until dishonesty sets in
Which brings me back to the truth
What daydreams we live in

Carm
Here I go again with negativity . One day I WILL write a positive verse
manchester, london,manchester , a mountain in Wales ,hills in Haiger
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carm
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Re: Circles

Post by carm »

Yorkshire Lad writes:
Here I go again with negativity. One day I WILL write a positive verse
They say that everything negative - pressure, challenges, thoughts, etc.,
are really camouflaged opportunities for us to rise above it all. A clear
understanding of negative emotions in most cases, dismisses them.

Yorkshire Lad writes:
I am not ambitious
So rest easy
I only speak of survival
But then survival is an ambition
To reach a comfort zone
And stay there
Until boredom sets in
Which brings me back to ambition
What circles we live in

I am not rebellious
So rest easy
I only speak of equality
But then equality is an ambition
To reach equanimity
And stay there
Until prejudice sets in
Which brings me back to ambition
What daydreams we live in

I am not in a daydream
So rest easy
I only speak of fantasy
But then fantasy is an ambition
To reach another world
And stay there
Until reality sets in
Which brings me back to normality
What circles we live in

I am not ambiguous
So rest easy
I only speak of the truth
But then truth is an ambition
To reach probity
And stay there
Until dishonesty sets in
Which brings me back to the truth
What daydreams we live in
Each thought and each thing is of
like form from everlasting and comes
round again in its cycle of constant
rhythmic return, as it breathes backwards,
forwards, back again and away, it is
sometimes asked as to how we should
approach it all and to what end – in terms
of exploring its form, cozying up as we do
to the comfort found in the stability of things.

.....

Thanks for your words Yorkshire Lad

:D
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