Train poem

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kleinschmidt
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Train poem

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A black man stole my money while i slept
in a moving train
from Venice to Rome
And all I could think of was Leonard Cohen
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lizzytysh
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Post by lizzytysh »

Now, there is an interesting poem! One that causes me to want to turn this into a conversation, exploring all the possible why's.
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something nice and special.. it just has got something...

how dyou know the guy was black, sleeping beauty ? ;) no just kidding, i think I see what you mean by that :)

nice one,
take care
Arno
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Yeah, something like a scene from some old, black-and-white film, somehow.
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It happened, and I wrote it down. I'm interrailing wright now, that's why I was robbed :D . Currently I'm in greece, I was planning on visiting Hydra, but I don't think i'l make it to heaven this time around.
Glad you liked the poem :D . Kleinschmidt
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Post by lizzytysh »

WoW! Hydra by summer? You can't make it? C'mon now, Kleinschmidt!!!

~ Lizzy

No wonder all you could think of was Leonard Cohen ~ knowing what a great, little poem it would make for here :wink: ! :D
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