I am not a poet

[philrose]

I am not a poet
or so it seems
I am not the lover
you feel in your dreams
I am not
what you were looking for
I am not
what I want to be
I am not
the man you hoped I'd be
I am not an artist
in an Amsterdam cafe
I am not
the man for you
I am not a writer
or a man of the year
I am just a man
who lives
inside a tear

[smccallon]

I really like the idea of this poem. The idea of not being the person another one thought you would be. There is something Cohenesque about this poem but I think the ending is weak compared to the rest. Being inside of tear seems to be a bit over-the-top when compared to the concrete images of the rest of the poem. I imagine that is probably part of the meaning of the poem...
Anyways, good job!

-Sean
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