I'm over it; are you?

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mat james
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I'm over it; are you?

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I'm over it;
are you?
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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I like it.
Nice and open with many possible stories that could go with it – not quite the same excitement level as your ‘?’ piece, but still… :D
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mat james wrote:I'm over it;
are you?
Not really,
I can still feel the warmth of your skin on mine
as I drift into that space that lays
somewhere between awake and dreaming.
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(I don't know if this is connected to any earlier thread and I have missed that connection..)

In my case it greatly depends on what 'it' is!

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Not really,
I can still feel the warmth of your skin on mine
as I drift into that space that lays
somewhere between awake and dreaming.
...somewhere past act
before thought
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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