Creation

eeey · Post by **eeey** » Sun Oct 06, 2002 3:53 pm

Don't talk rot, George.

Filth often disguises itself as something holy. But the "Divine" never masquerades as filth.

eeey

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Oct 07, 2002 12:59 am

and the apes with angel glands inseminated themselves????????

the Gods made love with the mortals
Georges

eeey · Post by **eeey** » Mon Oct 07, 2002 10:29 pm

What can I say, George.

You've got a mind like a steel trap.

eeey

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Tue Oct 08, 2002 2:02 pm

I like to think of myself as a free thinker, the trap is not a good analogy.
Georges

Daniel Petersen · Post by **Daniel Petersen** » Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:09 am

Hi peter

Such a great work. I tend to take my words about you back.

Art true art

Daniel

peter danielsen · Post by **peter danielsen** » Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:58 am

Thanks daniel, somehow I always believed we would meet. You see maybe we are not that different afterall. Some part of me is like you, and some part of you is like me. And some part of me is like the lovely young woman whom I think I am in love with. She has long dark hair, and just breeze across the floor when you see her. She is deeply poetic in the wild erotic and tender way. Shes got rage and sorrow. She is intelligent and vonourable and full of knowledge of her own potentiality. There is great hope for the world. I see that a star has been unified by two hearts again. I smell the scent of thunder, I see the bright light through the clouds. Help me God dont let the high ones laugh.

Peter

mickey_one · Post by **mickey_one** » Fri Jun 11, 2004 5:25 pm

*I will be glad if anyone could give me a hint if anything is wrong*

Yes, the poem is junk both according to my tatse and yours as well.

In English it is junk.

Pa Dansk ogsa, tror Jeg (sorry, no Danish punctuation on this keyboard)

In any language it is junk.

For minor league trolling you deserve 1 out of 10.

Farvel, tousand tak (ikke)

peter danielsen · Post by **peter danielsen** » Fri Jun 11, 2004 8:16 pm

took my diamond to the pawshop
but that dont make it junk

Rachel · Post by **Rachel** » Sat Jun 12, 2004 8:52 pm

I'm sorry but alone the stage directions don't work in this poem. How can the nice-little-girl whisper in such a predicament?

Daniel Petersen · Post by **Daniel Petersen** » Sun Jun 13, 2004 4:51 pm

The question is should she

Rachel · Post by **Rachel** » Sun Jun 13, 2004 7:07 pm

In certain circles it might be seen as rude or even dangerous

Daniel Petersen · Post by **Daniel Petersen** » Wed Jun 16, 2004 4:14 pm

yes, taking a piss might be seen as rude in some circles. But the real dangerous people are the aestehics, who slaughter to preserve their static tradition. These persons are the flappy liars who judge others, but in doing so, they prepare for themselves the path to hell. This offcourse is no judgement

daniel

Taigaku · Post by **Taigaku** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:21 am

Taigaku · Post by **Taigaku** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:23 am

PS This, surely, must be blasphemous, Peter?

"And you're screamin: release me
go on and go on
as you join in the night
the spirit, the son"

peter danielsen · Post by **peter danielsen** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 4:33 pm

"PS This, surely, must be blasphemous, Peter?"

-"I would not know...but did you report?"

-"You say I took the name in vain...but whats it to you?"

-"when you kneel below me...my manhood in your mouth?

Creation

To eeey

To eeey