repeat

ilang · Post by **ilang** » Sun May 30, 2004 11:55 pm

repeat

surely I must realize
this is all about deceit
the buildings fall, I’ve seen it all
insert, press play, repeat

the shadows from our future
fall on the gentle and the meek
the buildings fall, we’ve seen it all
insert, press play, repeat

surely you must realize
this will all lead to defeat
the buildings fall, you’ve seen it all
insert, press play, repeat

it’s all been read and seen and heard
there is no one left to meet
the buildings fall, we’ve seen it all
insert, press play, repeat

peace
ISL

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Mon May 31, 2004 9:39 am

I'm wondering if my thinking that this is an interesting way of expressing a dismal state of mind is accurate. It seems like a kind of 'giving up' in the romantic realm. It could also be societal commentary.

margaret · Post by **margaret** » Mon May 31, 2004 12:03 pm

With Ilang signing off "Peace", it seems like a social comment on the way history repeats itself.

very good poem

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Mon May 31, 2004 3:51 pm

You're right, Margaret. It's that, crystal clear. From 1999 through to 2004. Yes, I like the poem, too. I also like the way she reenforces the idea of repetition within the structure of the poem itself.