However, you will keep a copy of the suggestions on hand for when you review these in 30 years, right?
Just in case this batch doesn't stand the test of time? 
[Do poems come in batches? 
] In all seriousness, I liked your poem ~ as is ~ from the beginning. For a 30-year absence from the pen, I think you're doing very well! I know what you mean about the lack of time for reading. I have a number of bookmarked books sitting about.....a little at a time of each, as I'm able, but definitely not my preferred way to do it.
~Lizzytysh