I am house sitting for a friend at the moment in a beautiful house with some wonderful gardens. A while ago I wrote this poem for her. She really loves her garden and looks after all the wild life that visits, and gets very excited over her compost heap (don’t we all). And as I sat in the garden today, for the first time in a long time I thanked G-d I was part of the weird, wonderful and very beautiful world. And I really believe you can find great peace in nature.
You Must Come And See:
You must come and see my Compost Heap
I think it’s quite unique.
I’m sure there’s not another one
So rich and dark and sweet!
It’s filled with worms and crawling things,
A grass snake lives there too.
If I didn’t have my compost heap
I don’t know what I’d do.
You must come and see my Bug Motel.
I’m sure you’ll be impressed.
It’s got four floors and a garden,
And a place for mice to nest.
There are frogs and toads and lacewings,
And ladybirds and bees.
You may even see a beetle
If you get down on your knees.
You must come and see my Veg Patch,
There’s many things to sow.
You’ll have to try the lettuces,
And watch the rhubarb grow.
We’ve got ourselves a wildlife pond
Where newts and tadpoles swim.
And maybe when they’re big enough
They’ll make the slugs life grim.
You must come and see My Garden,
It really is divine.
The badger comes to visit us,
The fox comes round to dine.
There’s boxes filled with nesting birds
And parrots in the trees.
And if you want to find some peace,
Come See My Garden Please!
For Vikki...
Karren B
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You Must Come And See.
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Karren B
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You Must Come And See.
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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.. Hey Karren.. fun poem, and lovely sentiments.. it sounds like a wonderful place..
v i o l e t xx x
v i o l e t xx x
Violet
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Thanks Violet
It is a wonderful place...
I feel so good today, if that's what nature can do for you then, Bring it on!
Karren B (A very Happy Karren B)
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It is a wonderful place...
I feel so good today, if that's what nature can do for you then, Bring it on!
Karren B (A very Happy Karren B)
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'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Yorkshire Lad
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Karren
Now that is what I call a poem . Descriptive , informative and fun to read ! Fabulous !
I am posting one that is more or less on the same theme but although not as good I hope you like it . It is called the allotment
Now that is what I call a poem . Descriptive , informative and fun to read ! Fabulous !
I am posting one that is more or less on the same theme but although not as good I hope you like it . It is called the allotment
manchester, london,manchester , a mountain in Wales ,hills in Haiger
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
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Thank you as always for your kind comments...
I have two allotments that i love tending, and am looking forward to reading your poem...
Karren B
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I have two allotments that i love tending, and am looking forward to reading your poem...
Karren B
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'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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As you know Karren - this is right up my street 
Welldone! I loved reading this and can certainly identify with a lot of the sentiments involved
(by the way - my tomatoes turned for the better in the end - delicious! Hoorah! hehe)
A
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Welldone! I loved reading this and can certainly identify with a lot of the sentiments involved
(by the way - my tomatoes turned for the better in the end - delicious! Hoorah! hehe
)A
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Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
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Karren, thats so beautiful, loved it, i can see you there now!
Bet Vickki will love it too!
Bet Vickki will love it too!
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Thank you Alsiony... Glad to know your tomatoes made it after all...I know it was touch and go at one point...
I feel there's a good feeling here tonight, must be the nature thing...
Gerry,
Thank You, so much!!
Karren B
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I feel there's a good feeling here tonight, must be the nature thing...
Gerry,
Thank You, so much!!
Karren B
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'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Yorkshire Lad
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TWO ALLOTMENTS !! As we say in Yorkshire you should be"as fit as a butchers dog "Karren B wrote:Thank you as always for your kind comments...
I have two allotments that i love tending, and am looking forward to reading your poem...
Karren B
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YL
Btw I have sent you a pm let me know if you receive it please because I have been having a spot of bother sending .
manchester, london,manchester , a mountain in Wales ,hills in Haiger
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
Be content with a mistake or two. Perfection holds no compromise. It's a prison for perfect people .Where the flag of insanity flies
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Got your Pm. Thanks.
I know that saying...Have a lot of family around Yorkshire. But my favourite one that I still love is
'There's nowt so queer as folk' A very true observation I think...
Oh my allotments keep me very fit!
Karren B
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I know that saying...Have a lot of family around Yorkshire. But my favourite one that I still love is
'There's nowt so queer as folk' A very true observation I think...
Oh my allotments keep me very fit!
Karren B
xx
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Excellent!
That was fun. Lots of great colourful images - it made me think of Shel Silverstein who I still enjoy.
I bet your friend will love it!
That was fun. Lots of great colourful images - it made me think of Shel Silverstein who I still enjoy.
I bet your friend will love it!
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Thanks cate...
It is a very lovely and peaceful place to be...
With an awful lot going on in it at all times that we never really see.
Karren
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It is a very lovely and peaceful place to be...
With an awful lot going on in it at all times that we never really see.
Karren
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'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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What a great poem I loved that Karren.
Manchester 19th June/Cardiff 8th Nov
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Hi Karren,
I loved your poem also. One of your best. Reminds me of childhood in English countryside. Heaven
Cheshire gal
I loved your poem also. One of your best. Reminds me of childhood in English countryside. Heaven
Cheshire gal
'...and here's a man still working for your little smile' -Leonard Cohen
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Hi Cheshire gal
Thanks for your kind comments.
It is a lovely place to be...And it does seem like heaven sometimes.
Karren
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Thanks for your kind comments.
It is a lovely place to be...And it does seem like heaven sometimes.
Karren
xx
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'