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kim.mcarthur
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Call

I wait and I wait for your call.
I wait and I wait for no one’s call,
but I wait and I wait for your call.

I hope you don’t call.
I am better if you don’t call.
I will stop caring if there’s no call.

I am better without the call.
Then there is no need for any call.
For life without a call,

is life without the pain of no call.
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kim.mcarthur wrote:Call

I wait and I wait for your call.
I wait and I wait for no one’s call,
but I wait and I wait for your call.

I hope you don’t call.
I am better if you don’t call.
I will stop caring if there’s no call.

I am better without the call.
Then there is need for any call.
For life without a call,

is life without the pain of no call.

It takes balls to make that call :roll:
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Violet
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kim.mcarthur wrote:Call

I wait and I wait for your call.
I wait and I wait for no one’s call,
but I wait and I wait for your call.

I hope you don’t call.
I am better if you don’t call.
I will stop caring if there’s no call.

I am better without the call.
Then there is need for any call.
For life without a call,

is life without the pain of no call.
Hi Kim.. this cracks me up, I like it a lot.. however, don't you mean "Then there is no need for any call".. (?).. Isn't that what you meant to have there?.. then it makes perfect sense to me, and goes with the rest of the poem, I think.. (and you can immortalize this rascal more perfectly that way too)..

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Post by Cate »

I liked this and it made me smile in spite of the fact it sounds like something from my own head - especially the second stanza.

Violet - I wonder if she meant by 'any call' that she/N wants a call from any other person than 'that' person/s.
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.. oh.. I see what you mean.. only, it's giving me a head ache..
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Ha ha yes was supposed to be "no need." Thank you for the correction.
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Post by Alsiony »

Kim - I keep coming and looking at this - I really enjoyed it - so I thought I would say!

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Lol, yes unfortunately I do to. Thanks for the post,

Kim
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Post by lonndubh »

Hey Kim -
How are you
Just wondering if you ever got that call ??
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