Sunday and the Bee

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Alsiony
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Sunday and the Bee

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Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009

'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank

'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe

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Re: Sunday and the Bee

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Nice poem Alsiony; meandering and laid-back... then, the lovely surprise of the last stanza.
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Re: Sunday and the Bee

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Thanks I.F.

It's a true story - my Observer has got ikkle black scribbles and scrawlings all over it now haha

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Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009

'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank

'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe

Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
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