05/22/10

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Imagine89
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05/22/10

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Sitting on the largest rock
The stars are the only source of light
Shining on the waves
As they gently crash ashore
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A very pleasant scene.
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mnazz89 wrote:Sitting on the largest rock
The stars are the only source of light
Shining on the waves
As they gently crash ashore
I love the implication of a Moonless sky... I don't know if you meant it this way or not, but that is what I read in it :)

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I like how stars look when reflected in the water - it's an interesting image of them crashing into the rocks.
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Thanks for the comments :) and Alsiony I didn't mean to imply that but it's even better that you got something more out of it :razz:
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