Your Name upon my lips

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Violet
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Re: Your Name upon my lips

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.. I'm running out the door.. but I couldn't help but notice all the kisses, Karren.. this place is really changing you!!.. xx v i o l e t xxx x
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I'm pretty cynical when it comes to love-poems, but I liked this one Karren.

The image of solitary narrator making love to the 'other' via imagination/subconscious is playful yet powerful. Especially liked the sun-kiss in the morning.

~end of mushy behaviour~
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your name still moist upon my lips

We often think of a kiss that remains warm or moist on your lips, but you’ve said name, as if the persons very name or image causes your lips to be moist – it’s a simple but unique sensual thought.
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