A Poem for George, the Poet
A Poem for George, the Poet
Ciao George!
I, Vesuvius have written a poem! You have inspired me!
A Poem for George, The Poet
I encourage the Poets,
For that is my vow,
I praise them all,
To all I say ciao!
To all I do listen,
With wide eyes aglaze,
But George is the one,
I hear in a daze.
Apes and Angel glands,
Love, Death and Sin,
I don't know how,
He fits them all in.
His brain runs riot,
And his poems do too!
But I wouldn't change that,
Nor should you.
I encourage the Poets,
For that is my vow,
With over 100 poems,
George, please take a bow!
Vesuvius
Copywright: Vesuvius, April 21, 2004
I, Vesuvius have written a poem! You have inspired me!
A Poem for George, The Poet
I encourage the Poets,
For that is my vow,
I praise them all,
To all I say ciao!
To all I do listen,
With wide eyes aglaze,
But George is the one,
I hear in a daze.
Apes and Angel glands,
Love, Death and Sin,
I don't know how,
He fits them all in.
His brain runs riot,
And his poems do too!
But I wouldn't change that,
Nor should you.
I encourage the Poets,
For that is my vow,
With over 100 poems,
George, please take a bow!
Vesuvius
Copywright: Vesuvius, April 21, 2004
Ciao, Vesuvius
!
A most lovely gesture on your part
, and one that underscores your appreciation of George's ongoing commitment to his writing, which has improved as well
. I also like the way his mind is brimming with ideas and images, which I would be powerless to express in his fashion. You also did well with your conciseness and rhyming.
~ Elizabeth

A most lovely gesture on your part


~ Elizabeth
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Ves
Thank YOU!
Vesuvius (The New Poet)
Vesuvius (The New Poet)
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Ciao Makera,
Yes, welcome back. I am glad Taigaku persuaded you. I thought Taigaku was a she not a he. So now I have to build another image in my mind.
Yes! I am a new poet. But it is harder than I thought. I am working on my second poem. It is about Leonard. I want it to be good. It is not going good. I can't think of the words. It makes me respect George more.
Vesuvius
Yes, welcome back. I am glad Taigaku persuaded you. I thought Taigaku was a she not a he. So now I have to build another image in my mind.

Yes! I am a new poet. But it is harder than I thought. I am working on my second poem. It is about Leonard. I want it to be good. It is not going good. I can't think of the words. It makes me respect George more.
Vesuvius