poem
poem
Removed, potentially for comp (if I pluck up the courage to enter it)
Last edited by Alsiony on Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:36 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
Re: Bird
That's a lovely poem Alsiony I especially like the first verse
Armed with a tail-feathered gaze
Feel the healing yet wounding old world
Believe in your three open eyes
And take flight - little haphazard Bird
'And take flight-little haphazard Bird' is a good description because they do live very precarious lives
The third verse is strong as well,yes I love this poem!
'Still there's no Gadda Da Vida'
Armed with a tail-feathered gaze
Feel the healing yet wounding old world
Believe in your three open eyes
And take flight - little haphazard Bird
'And take flight-little haphazard Bird' is a good description because they do live very precarious lives
The third verse is strong as well,yes I love this poem!
'Still there's no Gadda Da Vida'
Manchester 19th June/Cardiff 8th Nov
Re: Bird
Thanks guys
I couldn't not use the Gadda Da Vida phrase kwills
... i]oh wont you come with me, take my hand, oh wont you come with me and walk this land[/i]...
Thanks for taking the time to comment both
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I couldn't not use the Gadda Da Vida phrase kwills
... i]oh wont you come with me, take my hand, oh wont you come with me and walk this land[/i]... Thanks for taking the time to comment both
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x
Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...