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Oscotarach
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Post by Oscotarach »

feeling a warm brest
under her silken blous
cuddly and soft like a
kitens little belly

yeilding to the touch
of my tickling fingers
until it can take no more
Harry S
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Oscotarach wrote:feeling a warm brest
under her silken blous
cuddly and soft like a
kitens little belly

yeilding to the touch
of my tickling fingers
until it can take no more
Hi Geoffrey. I think you have RENdered this poem beautifully and for once no spelling mistakes. Well done!
Oscotarach
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Harry S wrote:
Oscotarach wrote:feeling a warm brest
under her silken blous
cuddly and soft like a
kitens little belly

yeilding to the touch
of my tickling fingers
until it can take no more
Hi Geoffrey. I think you have RENdered this poem beautifully and for once no spelling mistakes. Well done!
you not sea the seecrt messidg?
Harry S
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Post by Harry S »

Oscotarach wrote:
Harry S wrote:
Oscotarach wrote:feeling a warm brest
under her silken blous
cuddly and soft like a
kitens little belly

yeilding to the touch
of my tickling fingers
until it can take no more
Hi Geoffrey. I think you have RENdered this poem beautifully and for once no spelling mistakes. Well done!
you not sea the seecrt messidg?
fuck you, of course I did Geoffrey.
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Alsiony
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Post by Alsiony »

Oooo nice

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Oscotarach wrote:feeling a warm brest
under her silken blous
cuddly and soft like a
kitens little belly

yeilding to the touch
of my tickling fingers
until it can take no more
OMG that's to funny

I'm going to hell aren't I
Harry S
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Post by Harry S »

you will be in good company, don't worry.

btw don't you agree that this Geoffrey troll is pretty much a reworking of his Ren?
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No - doesn't really seem Ren like - More MarIsha like
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Harry S
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my ego could never allow me to do an Oscotarach, too easy.
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Post by Harry S »

karrenb wrote:I really think that this forum has only two dozen members.

And i think i know who most of them are.

Karren xxxx(heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelp)
when we need your opinion Geoffrey, Ren will ask for it.
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Post by Cate »

ohhh but Harry - come on, that image of unbuttoning a blouse and discovering cuddly kittens - that's great.
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