Beckon me to come.

[Cate]

not keen on "manly sword" ouch but I like your poem.
It's fun with a nice rhythm to it <grin> as well a clever ending.

[Harry S]

Cate and me always agree, that "manly sword" has to go.

Geoffrey

[imaginary friend]

You might regret asking for suggestions. I'm sorry, but I can't keep a straight face when asked for that kind of suggestion (I can hardly keep a straight face at the best of times...)

[Cate]

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[imaginary friend]

What about 'lift me like...' rather than '...on'?

As in 'Lift me like an olive branch' (but not that of course).

[Alsiony]

What about - lift me like... a Ripe Gourd?? Haha

A
x

[Alsiony]

I will not say any more about my suggestion because I might make myself blush

A
x

[Cate]

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[Cate]

oh my goodness - I think I'm tired again

[kwills]

Place me on your ripe cucumber
And beckon me to come
Give me something to remember
And beckon me to come

[kwills]

Place me on your chilly willy
And beckon me to come
Firm and hot and very nibbly
You beckon me to come.

[kwills]

manly swords - giant gourds

what about

Enter me firmly, slowly
And beckon me to come.
Make me speak words unholy
And beckon me to come

Actually,being serious now keep with Cate's idea but change the last line from
And beckon me to come to
You beckon me to come.

[kwills]

The reference to chilly willy was this viewtopic.php?f=11&t=21532#p224993

[kwills]

Hi karrenb
I have posted a serious reply but you must have missed it in between posting.

Enter me firmly, slowly
And beckon me to come.
Make me speak words unholy
And beckon me to come

That's from cate I just thought that changing 'And' to 'You' in the last line would be better.

[Violet]

.. this conversation is making me feel a bit.. sore..