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Imagine89
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They will only let you down
Tempting and conniving
But there is no future amongst
Stand and applaud
For a temporary tease
But as the birds when you catch a glance
They will pass -
Love is a Road that will not fail you
It is permanent and perpetually paved
This is Eternity
Love is Eternity
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Thank you for posting this mnazz89,
I can't pick out which lines I like the best, because I like the whole idea of it, and the way that you have said it.

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Imagine89
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Thanks, i figured it was time I let somebody else read something I wrote..
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Ouch...
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Ouch? I wasn't insulting anyone haha. I said that in a general way
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no no.... I meant "ouch.. your poem 'pinged' me in the heart" if you get my drift...

Nice words...I felt them :)
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Ohhh ok. haha I just read it the wrong way
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