Do Not Believe

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Taigaku
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Do Not Believe

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It seems I'm going all mystical on you these days :D :shock:
"I know that I'm forgiven"... Here's a poem, originally posted at Allpoetry.com:

Do Not Believe

Do not believe
in love.
Live from love.
Gently
feed your fears
into flames of such
compassionate intensity
only tears
of gratitude remain.
I am with you in this.
You are with me in this.
Allow it to be
as it is.


If anyone is seriously tired of spiritual psychobabbel, let me know :wink:
I can write about cars and girls...

~Taigaku
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Post by lizzytysh »

:lol: ~ Good G~d, we come to this site to get away from topics of cars and girls! Well, 'cept maybe Tony :wink: [oh, Hi Tony! :lol: :D ].

As always, Taigaku, you find your way to the essence and make it real. Simply, truly beautiful and true.

All respect,
Elizabeth
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Post by Taigaku »

Thank you, Elizabeth :D

Well, cars and girls was not all that seriously intended.. The two words just came to me, a semi-quote from the band Prefab Sprout, who have a song entitled "Some things hurt more than cars and girls"...

But, you know, I kind of feel I've left outer, empirical reality all together in my writing.. :?

Well, inner reality is not so bad either...

~Taigaku
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Post by lizzytysh »

I knew you were teasing, Taigaku [that they were merely symbols] ~ however, I took advantage of the moment to, in turn, tease Tony. I've never heard of Prefab Sprout, so definitely wouldn't have made that connection :? ~ however, still managed to get it on 'me' very own :wink: . Your inner-reality writings are carrying on in their tradition of beauty :D . 'Tis a good thing ~ or ~ It's all good. :wink:

~ Elizabeth
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Post by Epurcelly »

Taigaku- I enjoy your relaxed style of writing. It is soothing and warm.
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Thank you very much, Epurcelly! :D That's a comment I truly appreciate getting.
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"Soothing and warm" ~ wonderful and fitting descriptive, Epurcelly.
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:lol: And then I called the name wrong, anyway.....I meant Tim, not Tony! [Sorry Tim :wink: , sorry Tony :wink: ].
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Post by George.Wright »

Taigaku, if we wanted cars and girls we would buy a Max Power magazine!!!
We are glad to get your gentle work here, keep it coming!!!
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by Makera »

Hi Epurcelly ~ :D

I loved your description of Taigaku's writing, "relaxed"..."soothing and warm". I had told him his style was 'calm' and 'calming'.
It does have an amazing quality, doesn't it.

~ Makera
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Post by Makera »

Taigaku ~ :D

"Write about cars and girls"? Oh yeah! :P
One should not make idle threats :lol:

~ Makera
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