oppression

ilang · Post by **ilang** » Mon Apr 19, 2004 8:39 am

oppression

I have traveled beyond exception
please follow me into the dawn
my promises are kept forever
behind the views of my flaws

if you search the night for my wisdom
you will find me broken and torn
between the shores of fate
under the waves of love

my heroes have left my in ashes
no phoenix shall ever arise
my life will scatter quite slowly
to gather into your eyes

peace
ISL

Epurcelly · Post by **Epurcelly** » Mon Apr 19, 2004 7:50 pm

I enjoyed your poem very much...

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Mon Apr 19, 2004 10:11 pm

Hi ilang ~

This, somehow [not sure why/how], feels like gentle surrender. I like it very much

.

~ Lizzy

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Tue Apr 20, 2004 11:19 am

ilang, this is a sensitive piece of work. Nice poem.
Georges