TO Leonard

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Thu Sep 12, 2002 4:15 am

On dancing on the glass
the beautifull ass
and the angel glands to be
the men in linen
did behave like women
and the worst women to be
the ship of sighs
and the gondola byes
it's the ship of state to be
and the luminous hate
of the matter of fate
or the chance that you will be free
Ten songs dancing
and women prancing
and the saviour of the mist and the sea
to be drowning and the sight a frowning
of Suzanne and the oranges and tea
in the future and the sight of the butcher
the partisan's already freed
of various positions and the devil of attrittion
and the nuclear fission
and the angular leison
and the byeword for the password that be
thats all, thats all it will be
and the sangria, the sangria..............in the sea
Georges

peter danielsen · Post by **peter danielsen** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 2:03 pm

Nice poetry, thats shows insight in LC works.

I once wrote a song (in danish, so I'll spare you) about a man who loved a broken Crystal so much that he bleed to death, with his heart filled with everlasting joy.

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 3:18 pm

Thanks for the reply, i like the image of the crystal embedded heart.
Georges

babz · Post by **babz** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 4:13 pm

Hi Georges

You do a wonderful job of finding all the diamonds in the Leonard Cohen mine! Wonderful juxtapositions!

Peace
Babz

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 4:19 pm

Thanks, i'm glad you like the poem, it was a struggle fitting things in.
Georges

babz · Post by **babz** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 4:30 pm

That's the beauty of it, Georges. You struggle, do all the work, and we get the benefit! And a measure of your success is that it comes out looking easy! It flows!

Peace
Babz

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 4:37 pm

I like your feedback, Babz. Your juxtapositions comment helped me to see it from that aspect. Your diamonds in his mine comment, as well.

I also see the struggle, as well as the more flowing result, Georges.

~Lizzytysh

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 5:02 pm

Thank you for your very kind comments, i write inspired. It flows like most of my work whilst i'm online. Some like it and others hate it but i can assure you.........it is from the heart.
Thanks again.............Georges
Peace.

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 5:04 pm

You know how i write Liz
you have stared at the sun.
Georges

eeey · Post by **eeey** » Mon Sep 16, 2002 6:50 pm

Dear George,

Just how many sangrias did you drink while composing this poem?

eeey

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Tue Sep 17, 2002 3:20 pm

Quite a few!!!!!!
Georges

TO Leonard

TO Leonard

Great song George

To Peter

Diamonds

To Babz

Struggle

To Babz

To Liz

To eeey