The Magical Holy Well

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Fri Apr 09, 2004 12:33 pm

There was a beautiful youth beside a Holy well of disaster
and the whole scene was captured forever in plaster
and he looked down to the waters of the magical Holy well
that was reflecting the light of the enraged full moon
which was orange to red in it's vampire gloom
gorged with blood and the portent of impending doom
and a thundering pure white horse wakened him back to reality
the way of the moon is the way to insanity
and he became agigated with his percieved profanity
his confused sexuality and his desire for the green
his handsome reflected lover had taken on a magical sheen
a divine vision, an apparation and a romantic dream
and his head was filled with an adonis breeze
as the cool air blew through the scented lemon trees
he was like a tarot card picture with the stars and the moon
a tear dripped down and a snowflake did bloom
it took over his life and his identity it assumed
and the flower hung it's head and face in shame
for daring to fall in love with the love with no name
and the dogs howled and barked in the background
and carry their message in an eerie unearthly sound
his feet suddenly left the well and the ground
and he swam and swirled in the Holy waters of life
and smothered and angered all the love and the strife
for his handsome male lover has taken himself a wife
and he was covered by the sediments and tears of the magical well in alabaster
lifted by angels to the top and immortalised forever in plaster
the Ozymandias of the homosexual masters
Georges

Copyright: George Wright 2004

Epurcelly · Post by **Epurcelly** » Fri Apr 09, 2004 8:54 pm

George- That is beautiful writing. I will be busy re-reading...

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sat Apr 10, 2004 3:00 am

Thank you Epurcelly for your generous comments.
Georges

Harry Harpin · Post by **Harry Harpin** » Sat Apr 10, 2004 9:51 am

Nice poem, George

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sat Apr 10, 2004 6:58 pm

Harry, please show some respect and delete your brain.

Georges

Harry Harpin · Post by **Harry Harpin** » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:50 pm

nice poem

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:58 am

No, Harry. But for you to compare my poetry to childkillings shows that you have some brain problems.
See young Dr Freud.
Georges

Harry Harpin · Post by **Harry Harpin** » Sun Apr 11, 2004 8:39 pm

yes, a very nice poem

Paula · Post by **Paula** » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:55 pm

Harry (or whoever you are) - You are disgusting in your bid for shock factor posting. I can't normally be bothered to respond to your crap postings but to make a pun on Georges poem to make a "joke" about Soham is vile. I am sure you will come back with some smart arse comment but you can shove your comments where the sun don't shine.

Byron · Post by **Byron** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 12:28 am

HH are you sick?

Byron · Post by **Byron** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 12:38 am

There are hundreds of place names called Holywell, or Hollywell. Do we cease to mention those places as well? (Pun intended)
You ain't funny HH. You just ain't funny. Not funny. Understand? You are not amusing in any way, shape, or form. I was finding your ideas of humour to be sick, vile and disgusting. If you wanted to provoke a reaction you have. I no longer wish to have any contact with you and your mind games. Life is too short to read your crap. Up yours (sideways)

Epurcelly · Post by **Epurcelly** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 7:42 am

Harry- Now you have done it...You have crossed the good people of this forum. You have tried to soil a man's writing with your ignorant, disrespectful posts. You are a damn fool Harry. I have no respect for you or your writing.

Go away...

Harry Harpin · Post by **Harry Harpin** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 11:17 am

I dont understand what is wrong with my praise for George's poem. I intend to be a good boy from now on.

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:39 pm

Thank you Harry.
Georges

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Mon Apr 12, 2004 7:11 pm

Harry ~

As long as you're Editing, you might want to also Edit the one you left out of the Editing process. It can be found between the two that you did.