My First Attempt at Classical poetry!!!

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Harry Harpin
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My First Attempt at Classical poetry!!!

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As winter left
our souls fell
like leaves from a
tree.

Now as summer approaches
back they come to thee and me.

Like a mad army
on manouveres
like a lost batallion
homeward-bound
we creep into a fireplace
and maketh not a sound!
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Epurcelly
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You are a genius Harry...
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lizzytysh
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Is "fireplace" analogous to "Hell"?
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Post by Epurcelly »

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