My Best Poem Yet, eat your hearts out, Losers!

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Harry Harpin
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My Best Poem Yet, eat your hearts out, Losers!

Post by Harry Harpin »

Eat your hearts out Losers
as you spy
froma distance
the Advance of the Master.

Any advance on that?
I thought not!

You spend your time
searching for rhyme
but I am aWinner
and Master of the Inner
Workings of the Heart
and Soul.
My Goal
toconvince you all
of my invincibility
and your comparative
invisibility
(in a literary sense, not trying to be rude at all)
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lizzytysh
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Location: Florida, U.S.A.

Post by lizzytysh »

Good heavens, Harry
When ya gonna stop
Harpin?

:wink:
Epurcelly
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Post by Epurcelly »

The evil poet strikes again...
ep
Arno
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Location: Munich, Germany

Post by Arno »

it's so ... (**sobbing**) BEAUTIFUL... how on earth do you create something this WONDERFUL... it's the BEST and most TOUCHING thing I ever read... you are a true GOD and everyone is below YOU... i could go on forever but I feel small in the presence of such a MASTER...

that ok harry ? now go ahead and do whatever you like to do while reading my answer :wink:

cya

and happy easter to all

Arno
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