Beside me she is sleeping

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Apr 01, 2004 7:55 pm

Ohhhh, Vegard ~ this appears to be [and I certainly hope it is] a current-scenario-based poem. So lovely and alluring. You sound like you feel so privileged and content. Nice combination. She must be a wonderful woman

. Your poem flows the way you appear to feel.

Arno · Post by **Arno** » Thu Apr 01, 2004 8:59 pm

I wont bore you with any more or less coherent ramblings and simply say:
I'm jealous... (I think this says it all

)

very very beautiful

Arno

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Apr 01, 2004 11:27 pm

Hi Arno ~

Who you calling incoherent and rambling

? I'm 'jealous,' too ~ does jealousy make one incoherent and rambling

?

I'm still amazed by the turnaround, Vegard

!

~ Lizzy

Amonynous · Post by **Amonynous** » Fri Apr 02, 2004 12:42 am

Thank you Elizabeth and Arno

And yes, she is indeed wonderful...

Iubita · Post by **Iubita** » Fri Apr 02, 2004 9:36 am

very nice poem, Vegard...I love it...you shared with us your blessing moments in a very beautiful way...thank you...
I am reading and re-...again...it's so lovely...

Warm regards,
Iubita

Arno · Post by **Arno** » Fri Apr 02, 2004 2:13 pm

I'm afraid you misunderstood me completely liz,

I meant this ONLY as self irony since I know that I sometimes write and write and noone really gets what I'm saying...
In a way you have just given me another example for this fact

So long and now I'll make it perfectly clear without any room for (mis-) interpretation:

I like this poem

Arno

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Apr 02, 2004 2:20 pm

I was teasing, Arno. You misunderstood me

. I knew what you meant. The wink was the clue ~ a way of teasing just because my post happened to precede yours [and, fittingly, as I've been assessed as "incoherent and rambling" meself]. A perfect opportunity for an uptake such as I did [or, at least, so I thought

].

~ Lizzy

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Apr 02, 2004 2:27 pm

So true, Iubita....the intimacy of feeling that it has; the feeling, as I read, that in the quiet of the night, I was there looking at her, too. Then, his sharing of her own words, so conclusively spoken. So affirming for him, with regard to his ponderings as she slept. So graceful.

Amonynous · Post by **Amonynous** » Sat May 15, 2004 2:46 am

Wow, I read through your comments again today,

Hah, you made me blush..

You people make me wish you all knew norwegian...

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Sat May 15, 2004 3:26 am

Hi Vegard ~

So, you write even more beautifully in Norwegian? I wish I knew it, too.

~ Lizzy