the beach hymn

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elazar
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the beach hymn

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waves spreading the wind
sand hugging the sun
souls glimpse unsinned
i stare at the smooth one

that soul unburied
makes an apearance by and by
the day so unhurried
i think it passes, the unspoken "hi"

onwards i explore
colorfull array of shapes
some i do adore
those used to the gapes

i sit here on a ledge
the sea to me spread
so to her i do pledge
my lifes waves to tread


salut,
e.
breathe deep and live
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Post by Zabka »

Hi Elazar

So good to see you. :) :) You sound lonely in your poem.

What's been happening with you?

Zabka
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What we have learned is like a handful of earth. What we have yet to learn is like the whole world. (Avvaiyar)
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Post by elazar »

hey zabka,
thanks for that!
yes i am a loner... no significant other in my life. i have my family and friends thank G-d, though loneliness does happen. i just think its a process, and all the more appreciation for when the companionship bit kicks in.
i have severed all ties with the problematic people and work only for the school doing the dorm counsellor job. i get a satisfactory amount of pocket change, and am doing fine. i am heading to sydney for the holiday break tomorrow, taking the countrylink train in the morning. i have some friends there. i am going to take night courses in art from april 27- june 22 at the http://www.melbart.com.au .its my dads birthday present to me. i also just became an uncle last friday! my eldest sister has a baby boy! they name it 8 days later, this friday. all in all having a good life. yet loneliness can be a damper, if i dwell on it. so i try not to, but when i come apon lots of lonely people like at a beach setting for example, i feel alone. or maybe its just the "endless" array of ..... :wink: ? that too.

salut,
e.
breathe deep and live
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