Silly Haiku

Epurcelly · Post by **Epurcelly** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:46 am

Fell in the cool grass
Chemicals on my skin now
Tell your dog to stay

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:53 am

You're right

, but it's true

.

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 7:32 pm

read haiku just now
understand very little
Sarah, here. Sit, stay.

regards,
Laurie

Epurcelly · Post by **Epurcelly** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 9:30 pm

Why who is sarah
The most beautiful name now
Is the wonder seen

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 10:32 pm

Sarah? Dog of course
Her furry socks do not match
Sniffs things in the grass

L

Arno · Post by **Arno** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 11:17 pm

just wrote my first haiku
it's unbelievably crappy
posted this instead

Arno

PS: sorry, very drunk and I had to post something

(I dont even know what makes a three line text a haiku, can anyone tell me -- I'll read when sober )

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Thu Mar 25, 2004 11:35 pm

Syllables:

5 - 7 - 5

Cheers,

L

witty_owl · Post by **witty_owl** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 1:43 am

Of syllables five
I mutilate seven more
Footprints on the web

Witty Owl.

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:14 am

Spiders leave footprints?
Webs. I must look closer now
Eight feet becomes five.

Gong!
(i feel sooo oriental....)
L

Zabka · Post by **Zabka** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:23 am

Laurie cracks me up
humour from alaska sharp
I can't finish this

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:40 am

Frogs writing haiku!!
Laughing at Alaskan fool
More than he could chew

sayonara!
Laurie-san

Zabka · Post by **Zabka** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:05 am

so it was my first
perhaps it would help me chew
rotwein aus deutchland

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:12 am

Z~

Stepping out of haiku-dom...

My "More than he could chew" line was in direct reference to your last line:

"I can't finish this"

Not a comment on your efforts!

What the hell is

rotwein aus deutchland

?

L

Zabka · Post by **Zabka** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:41 am

Laurie-san

Yes I know....

I was just playing along...

red wine from germany, like arno was using for fuel in his writing. and are you sure it's a he?

LaurieAK · Post by **LaurieAK** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 3:47 am

Z~

and are you sure it's a he?

Hell no.

What is it?

L