SHOES WITH NO FEET

[Juan Juanders]

SHOES WITH NO FEET
BEACH WITH NO SAND
SANDS WITH NO TIME
WAVES WITH NO HAND
SEA WITH NO SALT
HOOK WITH NO BAIT
FISH WITH NO FINS
LINE WITH NO WAIT
GUITAR WITH NO STRINGS
STRINGS WITH NO BOW
SONGS WITH NO WORDS
STAGE WITH NO SHOW
PEN WITH NO PAPER
TALE WITH NO BOOK
PLOT WITH NO AIM
SEE WITH NO LOOK
FLASH WITH NO CAMERA
DAY WITH NO LIGHT
LIGHT WITH NO SHADE
BLACK WITH NO WHITE
DEATH WITH NO LIFE
GRIEF WITH NO PAIN
HEART WITH NO BEAT
BLOOD WITH NO VEIN
HATE WITH NO BITTERNESS
GUILT WITH NO SHAME
WAR WITH NO BATTLE
WIN WITH NO GAIN
ME WITH NO YOU
MOTH WITH NO FLAME
FLAME WITH NO OXYGEN
STAKE WITH NO CLAIM

[Neophyte]

WOW!! The way you slipped in "Me with no you".......... Powerful!

[Alsiony]

I thoroughly love this - and I very much agree with Neophyte too, that was cleverly done and certainly full of impact.

Thankyou Juan

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