Universal Baby (inspired by Gaia theory and other things)

Alsiony · Post by **Alsiony** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 2:21 pm

(Withdrawn for competition)

lonndubh · Post by **lonndubh** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:51 pm

Alsiony wrote:Can you...will you...shake it up?
Perhaps something's bound to give
Maybe you'll save yourself-
Explode!
Convalesce...
Live!

Reading this I thought of The Beatles Hippy Hippy shake for some reason

Alsiony · Post by **Alsiony** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:16 pm

I was thinking of earthquakes and natural disasters when I wrote it - but I like your take on it hehe
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sammu5 · Post by **sammu5** » Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:33 am

I like the sentiment and passion behind your poem! Would make a good performance poem...

Thanks for this, sam

Alsiony · Post by **Alsiony** » Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:22 pm

Cheers for your comment Sam!

Thanks for taking the time to to say - it's nice to know that's how it comes across - I am glad you like it!
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