The Bird Flew
Re: The Bird Flew
Im taking notes and will be applying them to my next piece of work!.....I'll make you all proud!
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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my lawyers are watching you, Pal. if your next piece of work includes the words "yellow banana" in that order or any other order, for example "banana yellow", or the word "the", in that order or any other order, for example "the", you are in deep litigious shit.Gullivor wrote:Im taking notes and will be applying them to my next piece of work!.....I'll make you all proud!
do you make yourself clear?
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I can work around "yellow banana" or "yellow" and "banana" but let me ask you Lions of lions can I use "the" in a differnt languge besides english?
Last edited by Gullivor on Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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Sorry G, but you could write an amazing piece of poetry and if it is not spelt correctly, it loses its edge completely.
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I don't understand?
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Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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I see you edited your version of banana ( bananna) but you forgot languge
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The hell with it...I need an editor!
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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Ah, it was just some constructive criticism.
. don't take it to heart.

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Naw....will you be my editor tindarella?
I can pay you on a commision base only....we well starve to death togeather!
I can pay you on a commision base only....we well starve to death togeather!
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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Well if you don't sort out that spelling now, we will definitely starve.... get to it boy! 
Hey I didn't mean anything bad honestly. There is a crack in everything!

Hey I didn't mean anything bad honestly. There is a crack in everything!
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Hey Tinders,
Enjoyed your comments on the Dublin Concert thread. Nice shot of you and Dino!
Enjoyed your comments on the Dublin Concert thread. Nice shot of you and Dino!
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Thanks IF... He is just getting better and better in my opinion. It was incredible to be there last night. I loved every second and have withdrawal symptoms now.
I have to have an early night tonight. I am knackered, as we say here
I have to have an early night tonight. I am knackered, as we say here
