The Bird Flew

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Gullivor
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Re: The Bird Flew

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Im taking notes and will be applying them to my next piece of work!.....I'll make you all proud!
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Gullivor wrote:Im taking notes and will be applying them to my next piece of work!.....I'll make you all proud!
my lawyers are watching you, Pal. if your next piece of work includes the words "yellow banana" in that order or any other order, for example "banana yellow", or the word "the", in that order or any other order, for example "the", you are in deep litigious shit.

do you make yourself clear?
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I can work around "yellow banana" or "yellow" and "banana" but let me ask you Lions of lions can I use "the" in a differnt languge besides english?
Last edited by Gullivor on Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sorry G, but you could write an amazing piece of poetry and if it is not spelt correctly, it loses its edge completely.
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I don't understand?
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I see you edited your version of banana ( bananna) but you forgot languge
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The hell with it...I need an editor!
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Ah, it was just some constructive criticism. :) . don't take it to heart.
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Naw....will you be my editor tindarella?

I can pay you on a commision base only....we well starve to death togeather!
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Well if you don't sort out that spelling now, we will definitely starve.... get to it boy! :)
Hey I didn't mean anything bad honestly. There is a crack in everything!
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Hey Tinders,

Enjoyed your comments on the Dublin Concert thread. Nice shot of you and Dino!
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Thanks IF... He is just getting better and better in my opinion. It was incredible to be there last night. I loved every second and have withdrawal symptoms now.
I have to have an early night tonight. I am knackered, as we say here :)
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