Tasting

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George.Wright
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Tasting

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A taste
of freedom and the home
the dna and it's clone
the ghost and the doppleganger
the new clothes and the hanger
the smart new car and the old banger
the model and the wife
the death and the new life
the truth and the old wife's tales
the train and the going off the rails
the diamond and the coal
van morrison and the jelly roll
the freedom and the toll
the oppressed and the free soul
the vanquished and the winner of the poll
the universe and the black hole
the stallion and the new born foal
the undresser and the undressed
the truth that you so tried to supress
the sweet and the sour
einstein and the hour
the wheat from the flour
the dark from the flare
the small matter that you did not care
the covered and hidden from the bare
the focussed from the vacant stare
the lion and the dirty tramp
the mystic and his magic lamp
the innocent and the tarty vamp
and all are opposites over there
the other sides of the square
that tantalise the tastebuds in duality
that realise we are all part of reality
Georges
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Post by lizzytysh »

I love this one and its conclusionary message. Very clear as well :D .
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Post by George.Wright »

Thanks for your compliments, liz
Georges
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Post by Ben Kelly »

George


Truly, Mouth-Watering-Delicious

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Post by George.Wright »

Thank you Mr. Kelly for your kind remarks.
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by Byron »

George, I think you have described every little diamond and gritty stone in our journey from innocence to infinity. Thank you.
Regards. Byron.
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Byron, from conception to the unknown....................thanks for your kind posting.
Best regards.......Georges
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Post by Coco »

Hi George!


I liked the contrasts in this one! :) Keep on writing.
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Post by George.Wright »

Will do, CoCo. Thanks for the encouragement, it is appreciated.
Georges
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