L.C. Revisited

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elfra
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Joined: Sun Aug 18, 2002 3:13 am
Location: Manchester U.K.

L.C. Revisited

Post by elfra »

One of word and song
Relatively connected
Naked heart exposed
Such confident repose

Speaker of the need
Needing none and all
Sweet teaser of love
You know in love we fall

Exalted by your gloom
We wipe away the tears
Rejoicing in your comeback
Forgetting all our fears

Motionless you travel wide
Through cable company
Your talking gobal web
Echo's perfectly

Deeper into golden songs
You rise like burning bread
The recipe of silence
Speaks softly to the dead
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Pete
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Location: Evesham, England

Post by Pete »

Hi Elfra

I like the phrase ' the recipe of silence'
I'm always on the lookout for the phrase that seems unique to the poem.
Not as though I will pinch the phrase but it is one that can be dropped into conversation.
:)

See you in the chatroom? unless I've mixed you up with someone else :oops:
Pete
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