david roche

[iveta]

David Roche

Does the medical term vascular malformation make you less of a monster?
‘cause in case such a bunch of veins dares to go on public
Of course the first question is How can you live with this?

OK it wasn’t always easy I had to go to self esteem therapy
They told me to look into the mirror, make an eye contact
And say out loud David, I love you, David, I love you, David……aaagggghhhh

your tiny eyes getting out of the deep socket to show the sharp loath

OK I realized I don’t have to lie to myself,
so I came to the mirror , did not force myself to eye contact and put it straight

(and now the bunch of veins changes into pathetic dumping playboy, voice trembling )

David….
you’re a really nice guy
you’ve got a great sense of humour
but sorry
I just don’t love you
maybe I’m too young to make a commitment yet
lets just be friends

your real face seem to get out from the other side of the mirror
dark eyes shine sweet smile comes out

laughing out so loud so free

David I love you
David I love you
David I love you
Maybe you’re too old and have a commitment already
But oh please please if we could just be friends


http://fora.tv/2008/02/12/David_Roche_C ... _Sincerity


Sorry I'm no poet at all but I had to tell you about this guy because i find him so cool and funny and beautiful and wise.....
I am afraid he deserves a decent poem....if any of more skilled cohen community poet would kindly watch him and accept the job I would be most grateful

Iveta

[Lion of Lions]

I offer this little tribute to two Giants, to David for his inspiration, and to Jack for his inspirational "poetry". David always makes me feel I may be able to do better. Jack always makes me feel certain anyone can do better (than him).

David Roche
has a diamond brooch
he keeps it under his knees
a handsome lover,
he doesn't hide under cover
but faces life with ease



sorry, it took me so long but I am working on several other projects at the moment.

[lazariuk]

i think he is going too high with the 80%
80% is too high to be able to sustain all the time.

One time I told my son that I think that should he ever be interested in doing something well that a 60 % effort might be the best to shoot for.
I used two things to support my claim.
The first was that it had survived the teachings of a very long linage of what are known as "wise masters", meaning that each successive master had the opportunity to drop it from the teachings but that so far none have done so.
The second way I demonstrated it to him is that I bought a toy gyroscope, set it in motion and showed that as long as you were a small bit toward a certain side when you touched it then you were always sure of getting it to go in the direction you choose. A gyroscope always operates at a 90 degree angle from the point you interact with it. A gyroscope is probably the best physical example we have of the effect that we have on other people and the effect they have on us.

[Lion of Lions]

A gyroscope is probably the best physical example we have of the effect that we have on other people and the effect they have on us.

nonsense. you and Geoffrey get 10% erections when you see attractive women, 35% erections when you see one other, and 84% erections when you see yourselves.

[iveta]

and 84% erections when you see yourselves.

....and if you could even analyze your own subconscious so profoundly you'd probably reach much more than 80% percent sincerity

no of my business anyway

just wanted to tell you that this poetry police - victim chase is for sure the greatest drama this information superhighway can ever offer

and its great fun of course

i

[Lion of Lions]

and 84% erections when you see yourselves.

....and if you could even analyze your own subconscious so profoundly you'd probably reach much more than 80% percent sincerity

no of my business anyway

just wanted to tell you that this poetry police - victim chase is for sure the greatest drama this information superhighway can ever offer

and its great fun of course

i

my sincerity rating here is in the low 20%s on a good day and that's where I hope it stays. this is a cyber playground not real life!!! I have never taken Jack or Geoffrey seriously and I would be sad if they ever took me seriously.

[iveta]

sorry, I meant the word "drama" as an irony, of course I appreciate fun and humour
apparently have to brush up my english and learn to sound humourous when i mean it

[lazariuk]

this is a cyber playground not real life!!! I have never taken Jack or Geoffrey seriously and I would be sad if they ever took me seriously.

Dear Michael

I am here to inform you that you do not get to decide for everyone what is real life and what is taken seriously. I can't speak for Geoffrey but I am serious in my concern about your behavior, about what you have done in the past and what you might do in the future.

[Lion of Lions]

this is a cyber playground not real life!!! I have never taken Jack or Geoffrey seriously and I would be sad if they ever took me seriously.

Dear Michael

I am here to inform you that you do not get to decide for everyone what is real life and what is taken seriously. I can't speak for Geoffrey but I am serious in my concern about your behavior, about what you have done in the past and what you might do in the future.

ha ha ha, Rock On, Jackie!

your concern for what I have done in the past is well-placed but remember I was only 8 at the time and I put the sweets back. your concern for what I do in the future is also well-placed as I intend to continue to crit. your "writing" until I get bored and once again ban your posts from my computer.

my only concern about your "behavior" is your spelling and that you might write another "poem". don't do it- there are innocent and vulnerable people out there who have done nothing to deserve such infliction of pain.

just for you I have invented the word "uncore"- it means the traditional shout from the audience for less every time you "perform".

[Lion of Lions]

sorry, I meant the word "drama" as an irony, of course I appreciate fun and humour
apparently have to brush up my english and learn to sound humourous when i mean it

no apology needed. as the Aussies say, "no dramas".

anyway, I hoped you liked the poem I wrote for you.

[iveta]

and of course I appreciate fun and humour of all the dispreached paraphrases including david´s one, thank you