A child of the white snow ( a poem )

Aletheia · Post by **Aletheia** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:25 am

You were a child of the white snow
and a chilly majestic form
torned you out of your world
and told you a secret

allready as a child
you were confident with
the burdens of the adults
which weighed down your mind
and left a black hole
in your soul

you are a child inside
but on the outside an adult
og that is why I want to
bathe you in pure love
og love you
every single of your nights

you have so many cracks
in your soul
that all the light can come in to you
og fill up your whole body and soul

and alive you stand before me
in the cold black night
as a chilly majestic form
and torns me out of my world
reveals the secret of live to me

iveta · Post by **iveta** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:03 am

you have so many cracks
in your soul
that all the light can come in to you
og fill up your whole body and soul

I like this very much....you steal at least as beautiful as LC does it with Lorca

I know about copyright, but I believe that the most attractive poems should be deeply shared
wish you lots of beautiful reading nights
iveta

Aletheia · Post by **Aletheia** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:14 am

Hi!

I am just getting inspired by LC when I write

I heard the song "Anthem" when I wrote the poem, but I am afraid that my translation from danish to english is bad, but I do my best.
I am danish and it is difficult to tranlate my poems into english, I think

iveta · Post by **iveta** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:26 am

Don´t worry I´m from Europe too, but they´ve got some very nice native speakers here to check the language and the harmonies

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