There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
were arm in arm with
joy, beauty and charm
There were not that many
There were not that many
Last edited by lazariuk on Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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they were 3-armed?
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Makes me wonder too how they managed that .Manna wrote:they were 3-armed?
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
somehow managed to bring along with them
joy, beauty and charm
(consider this unfinished)
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
somehow managed to bring along with them
joy, beauty and charm
(consider this unfinished)
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
Re: There were not that many
There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
had deep in their hearts
charm beauty and joy
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
had deep in their hearts
charm beauty and joy
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
Re: There were not that many
There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
had close to their skin
joy, beauty and charm
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
had close to their skin
joy, beauty and charm
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
brought close to the edge
of their flesh
joy, beauty and charm
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
brought close to the edge
of their flesh
joy, beauty and charm
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
Re: There were not that many
lazariuk wrote:There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
were arm in arm with
joy, beauty and charm
Jack.. I think Manna might have been kidding.. I think this first version works.. maybe add an 'and'...
"joy and beauty and charm"... (now you've kept the nice sound of arm and charm)...
v.
Violet
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It always serves me well to take everything seriously until I am forced to laugh.Violet wrote: Jack.. I think Manna might have been kidding..
I sometimes feel like a person driving along the road who hears a traffic report of some car going the wrong way on a one way street and calls the station saying "One car? They are all going the wrong way" Who knows? I might be right.
Anyway Violet the whole purpose of the poem was to tell you that I might have been overstating to you when I said that many returned and I got a little distracted by memories.
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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There were not that many
It just seemed that way
because the ones who arrived
had deep in their hearts
charm beauty and joy
The Three Graces?
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Are they not the sisters of Mercy?Martine wrote: Nice.
The Three Graces?
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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Don't know.
I was thinking of Canova's sculpture of The Three Graces.
I was thinking of Canova's sculpture of The Three Graces.
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is that the one of 3 bottoms?