The Scourge of Computers

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George.Wright
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The Scourge of Computers

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And they said we would be killed by those machines
the creatures with no emotions, those binary fiends
and we gave them noughts and ones
and expected them to shine like the sun
and we gave them artificial intelligence, one day
to entertain us in the games we like to play
and suddenly we were the hunted and they were the hunter
as we sat endlessly in front of them, with fast food, looking like billy bunter
and we refused to use our brain no more
in our endevours to increase our game score
and the flickering lights and escapism turned us to zombies
in trying to outdo ourselves if you please
and the machine artifically laughed at our plight
as we took a heart attack in the middle of the night
and continued to live long past us
no decaying or turning into dust
George
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by lizzytysh »

Oooooh, I like this, Georges. Now, maybe you'll write one regarding all the unanticipated benefits :D .

~ Lizzy
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Post by George.Wright »

I thought i would do a funny but true poem for a change, don't worry Liz, there will be others................................
Georges
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Post by Makera »

Funny one, George...
We can't let the 'pot' rule the 'Potter', though, can we? Or we'll just go 'potty', hee hee. :wink:

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Post by Kush »

Nice one. It reminds me of the cartoon of the evolution of man from a stooping ape to straight man and then back to stooping again as he sits in front of the computer - in a series of images.
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Post by lizzytysh »

Excellent comic, Kush. I can visualize it soooo easily :lol: . Not that long into computer world, I can relate to the "scourge" aspect, as well....the way I felt prior to becoming personally acquainted with them.
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Post by George.Wright »

Thanks Liz and Kush. As we all use computers to access this site, i thought a funny poem on our growing need for them was apt.
:D Georges :D
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Post by Pete »

my pc likes this poem :)

Pete
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Post by George.Wright »

Thanks, pete. We will have to keep your PC happy.
Georges
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