feel your brain

[elazar]

the trick of wit has been
will be and is simplicity
elaboration is like
unplucked weeds that
mar a vegetable garden

slip into your subconscience
when you're there you will
know you are there
sit in the shade
on the grass or a rock
close your eyes

trace a path
to where you want
to know
strip away preconceptions
fondle your soul
feel its pleasure
in sudden awareness


salut,
elazar

[lizzytysh]

Australia agrees with you, Elazar ~ very appealing .

~ Elizabeth

[Makera]

Elazar~
Exquisitely and succinctly brilliant!
I think I've now seen proof of Melbourne's true worth: introspective & intuitive inspiration. I particularly liked the poetic subtlety of "subconscience", also.

~Makera