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elazar
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i started accupuncture today

railroad tracks
running down my leg
swollen and lumpy
i offer you my body

like second hand tackle
or a war scarred landscape
metallic and grotesque
i offer you my body

would you trace your fingers
over the map of my life
cool hands on burning flesh
i offer you my body

creaky joints and spindly veins
prone to cramps
risk of clots (filter installed,no worries)
i offer you my body

salut
elazar
Last edited by elazar on Tue Nov 04, 2003 4:37 am, edited 1 time in total.
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lizzytysh
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Post by lizzytysh »

Hi Elazar ~

Massage/acupuncture schools would appreciate having a copy of this poem of yours. I've enjoyed the wonders of acupuncture myself, and find this a very interesting response and "take" on it.

~ Elizabeth
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