A drip of your lava

This is for your own works!!!
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Monday
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Joined: Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:11 pm

A drip of your lava

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Now they talk politics again
they defend their directions
as if their was no third dimension

When the party is over
they return to their sleep
for it's all just suspension

Now my tongue has tried out
I need a drip of your lava
I long for your longest attention
Harry S
Posts: 255
Joined: Sat May 02, 2009 1:58 pm

Re: A drip of your lava

Post by Harry S »

Monday wrote:Now they talk politics again
they defend their directions
as if their was no third dimension

When the party is over
they return to their sleep
for it's all just suspension

Now my tongue has tried out
I need a drip of your lava
I long for your longest attention
this is really horrible. and sort out your "there" from your "their". their's a good guy.
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