This Odd New Weight Called Freedom

[Casey Butler]

Bambi?

The Avatar's name is "Rudolf". He doesn't have a mother.

Casey

[Red Poppy]

I know - she got shot by a flying poem,
and now the poor beggar's without a home,
destined forever to wander alone,
with a head full of wobbly (to be pronounced wobb-e-ly) bone.

Eureka, I've writed a pome.................

Comments please but only positives. I can't take the rest

[Cate]

A fine poem Red Poppy.
A tragic story brought to rhyme.

Cate

[Red Poppy]

Thank you Cate - you just confirmed my own high opinion of the piece