violence...

[magneticcry]

an ocean of love and friendship,
the waves of care and passion...
the drops of broken hearts
are made by future fashion.

a sandy golden field-
the desert of emotions,,,
the scent of tortured souls-
like perfumed body-lotion...

the forest of pretanding,
where branches mixed with leaves,,,
the taste of crime and killing-
`s the softening balm that heals...

like frozen slippy iceberg
my aching body sinks,
just pour and shake and serve it-
a freshing salty drink...

the castle of my feelings-
a tiny empty room...
the reason i am bleeding,
`s that violence is my groom...

[George.Wright]

This is a nice flowing poem, magneticcry
Georges

[magneticcry]

thank you ))))
this flowing just comes from nowhere,i`ve tried to make not flowing poems,but i just caaaaan`t ((((