Taking the Broken Hill Together

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normanball
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Taking the Broken Hill Together

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I'm not here to bow at strumming temples.
My knees have lost the stomach to be knelt.
I submit to orchestrating Y*weh
--in chords that He would have Himself be spelt.

--Norman Ball
Marisha
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Re: Taking the Broken Hill Together

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I'm not here to bow at strumming temples.
My knees have lost the stomach to be knelt.
I submit to orchestrating Y*weh
--in chords that He would have Himself be spelt.

Hello Norman, I really like your poem. In my family lots of us have trouble with eating ordinary wheat and we feel we have "lost the stomach" like you. I don't really understand the connection with "chords" and "spelt" but i know spelt is grown in the mountains and then Bingo! you were thinking of Leonard in Mt Baldy, right? I don't know if he also has a gluten/wheat problem but I like to think I have something in common with the Master!

thanks for your poem and hope your stomach is not too bad

Marisha









a hardy variety of wheat of inferior quality, sometimes grown in mountainous regions. Latin nam
Marisha
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Re: Taking the Broken Hill Together

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Dear Norman this is the one where you forgot to comment on my comment (and it's not the only time, you Naughty Boy!). I just wanted to ask you how the stomach was today and whether you have devised any strategies to deal with your allergy

love

Marisha
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